Ten-Ten Weekly comics(MVP)...what do you think?

My company (Guereza Animation, guerezanime.com) launched a comic-strip like Ikebe Supa of the 90s, or your regular comic-strip in newspapers or Japanese manga (black & white), but in this case a newsletter where every weekend you receive a unique story of everyday Africans and their stories.

here is the link to the MVP: Episode 1

Looking forward to what y’all think, and how best you think we could grow subscribers.
Thanks!